So, we’ve dispelled the saying, “You can’t go home again!” Our poets offered a wonderful mix of memory and angst about their origins.
Many things and people influence our lives, be they our parents, siblings, mentors, role models… they all have one thing in common: the ability to affect change in others just by their presence and wisdom.
“HOW DO YOU VIEW your life? – POETIC BLOOMINGS MEMOIR PROJECT
Part 4: With a Little Help From My Friends – Again, we are putting restrictions (darn restrictions!) on your muse. Family members, although influential, will play a special role down on the list of prompts. Today, write about someone who is or had been a great influence in your life. How did they affect you, what important lesson did they impart? It could be a neighbor, a teacher, a close friend, a group of them or a total stranger. If there was a lesson to be learned there, they’re fair game. Thank them for giving you a hand up.
MARIE ELENA’S GODSEND
Might You Be A Poet?
She once was told to write about someone influential in her life –
someone with no family ties.
So she set aside for a moment the fact that they are surely
twin cousins, separated at birth,
growing up in an eerily similar life and time.
She focused instead on the shared yellow brick road
to poetic solidarity.
It took no effort on her part, as her pen gushed
camaraderie
harmony
laughter -
then abruptly stopped.
She coaxed it gently, conceding the feeling
something was missing.
It began again – this time slowly, softly,
in watercolor.
She watched as it whispered
t e a r s
p r a y e r s
g r a t i t u d e.
Ah, yes.
She capped her pen,
and smiled warmly eastward.
© Marie Elena Good – 2012
WALT’S LIFE MASTER:
GO WEST, YOUNG MAN
Cast bread upon the water,
manna for the mind at a time when
his words mattered, but never found their voice.
He had a choice to make -
take his cache of word hash home,
or drop crumbs into the water;
laced with cadence and nuance
which would lead him back to where he belonged,
ripple after ripple, broadcasting in the beauty of words.
Westward he gazed, where her admiration bathed
his tired and tepid soul; a grasp for control
of what lived within him. Encouragement came
in comforting tones, impassioned pleas
to please the one who found purpose in his prose;
piety in his poetry. For no notoriety
would come without words that spoke to hearts,
or thoughts that touched souls,
or one who would allow him into both sanctuaries.
His lessons came in the belief in his convictions,
the gratitude for his gift, and a strong hint of humility;
in his attempt to share his world with all who wanted
to cast their bread upon the water alongside his own.
I had written an alternate piece for this prompt:
ALL THE WORLD’S A STAGE
Long after the rage and the death of two,
I was given the chance to enhance
an amazing tribute; a salute to four
so “Fab” that it became part of their name.
And I was adorned as the “stiff one”;
dark suit and striped tie, sweating bullets.
Happiness is not a warm gun when nerves
kick in. I begin each “really big shoe”
with my arms folded and mouth turned down -
half frown, half – I’m going to lose my lunch.
A great bunch of entertaining musicians;
they were equipped with replica guitars
acting like the stars they were. Getting by
with a little help from my friends.
Mr. Sullivan, on stage alone
until the words I intone, “Ladies
and Gentlemen, the Beatles!”
© Walter J. Wojtanik – 2012
Process notes: I had been asked to do my impersonation of Ed Sullivan to open and introduce a Beatles tribute band on stage. I had NEVER had the grapes to do it in public, let alone spotlighted on stage before a packed house. My shyness and fear of public speaking died that night. Lesson learned the hard way. I am grateful for that opportunity!




August 19th, 2012 at 1:57 AM
Okay, you two… I won’t guess this time — beautiful, both!
!!
August 19th, 2012 at 9:54 AM
Seconded! Both excellent pieces — and on the same page, as so often happens. Two points on the compass.
) Two beautiful blooms!
August 20th, 2012 at 12:37 AM
Wonderful tribute poems you two … really … just wonderful
August 20th, 2012 at 9:22 PM
Ah – - just saw Walt’s “Ed” – he’s a ringer … cool
August 20th, 2012 at 10:00 PM
Oh yeah!!
)
August 22nd, 2012 at 8:13 PM
Agreed!!! Wonderful words both!! This…
“t e a r s
p r a y e r s
g r a t i t u d e.
Ah, yes.”
Love this, Marie.
August 22nd, 2012 at 8:52 PM
Thanks, Sweetie! <3
meg
August 26th, 2012 at 4:28 PM
Walt and Marie – beautiful tributes and so neat to be there for each other.
August 19th, 2012 at 10:43 PM
Thanks Hen and PSC!
Marie Elena
August 19th, 2012 at 3:30 AM
(I could look backward, but I would rather look forward…)
…INSPIRATION…
I don’t even know you
And yet,
It Feels as though I KNOW you.
You don’t know me…
And yet,
I find comfort and inspiration
in your very presence.
And when you are gone
I realize
there is a part of you
that stays with me
Always…
And we haven’t even met
yet,
but
I wanted to somehow
thank you
anyway.
August 19th, 2012 at 9:57 AM
Oh, an interesting twist — shades of Michael Buble’s “I just haven’t met you yet”. I like this Hen!
August 19th, 2012 at 1:49 PM
Thank you, PSC; you know… I hadn’t even thought of that song… but you are right, now that I reread it…
!
August 20th, 2012 at 12:38 AM
ditto PSC’s comment – the same thought occurred to me as well … nice poem
August 20th, 2012 at 2:46 AM
Thank you, Sharon … music and me— I couldn’t think of a greater compliment!
!
August 19th, 2012 at 10:03 AM
This made me smile, Hen. Let us hope tat we all have that someone in our futures!
August 19th, 2012 at 1:51 PM
… yes… wouldn’t that be Nice… But, if not… well, we are poets, thus we can easily Dream…
, Thank you, Linda!
August 19th, 2012 at 10:09 AM
I like this. Clever and optimistic.
August 19th, 2012 at 1:52 PM
Thank you, Connie
!!
August 19th, 2012 at 10:45 PM
Nice! Just as Walt and I refer to each other as the best friend we never met.
Marie Elena
August 20th, 2012 at 2:48 AM
YES, that’s right… can happen
!!!
August 26th, 2012 at 4:37 PM
Hennrietta, beautifu, positive and thoughtfully written. To find a place where kindred spirits can grow and share – with notes of music added – is truely an inviting, restful place.
August 19th, 2012 at 6:32 AM
Glad you two know how lucky you are. She said, envious.
August 19th, 2012 at 7:45 AM
Thanks Barbara/Henrietta. Yeah, sometimes we lose sight of that fact, but the reminders always bring us back into the proper focus. Yes, we do realize it.
August 19th, 2012 at 10:45 PM
Ditto.
Marie Elena
August 20th, 2012 at 2:30 PM
Grins on your Sullivan, Walt. I’d have needed two beers for courage. Which would have slowed my 33 1/3 down to about 15.
August 19th, 2012 at 6:52 AM
Thanking my college roommate’s (as progressed) fan-suitor-sweetie-husband, Arnie, and his roommate, Ray
Arnie and Ray
punning over dinner
taught me words could play.
August 19th, 2012 at 6:54 AM
Lucky you!
August 19th, 2012 at 10:10 AM
Fun!
August 19th, 2012 at 10:46 PM
Oh, how much I love this one, Barbara! Yep … you make me smile!
Marie Elena
August 20th, 2012 at 12:39 AM
wow – how cool is that? nice …
August 20th, 2012 at 7:01 PM
Love this one!
August 26th, 2012 at 4:40 PM
OH, how wonderful to have such shared friendship and bond.
August 19th, 2012 at 9:22 AM
Rooted
Twig, leaf, limb, bark, branch, trunk and root,
each are essential to wholeness and wellbeing;
the relationship is integral on all levels.
Just as this tree that needs each piece
every pine needle and green gemmed leaf,
amber pitch and sap of life runs thick;
my soul that is made whole by you.
From birth you’ve been strength that I cling to
the very vine and root that spread neath my feet,
you’ve caused this emerald canopy to be fuller.
Our friendship boosts the bole of me
shared compassion that speaks clearly to the core.
Yes, and just as the majestic oak experiencing change
we stand tall not falling or ceasing the celebration of life,
moving through each season we stand and dance through it all
and we do not grieve the loosing of a leaf for it is fodder for the cycling.
We carry on stretching and growing strengthening and glowing
From earthen cradle where we were once small seeds,
born from the same womb, we are connected.
Our roots roil richly in spite of and because of calamity,
we choose to gather and gain height, reaching to the Son
knowing and holding sisterhood, sacred and nourishing.
©Hannah Gosselin 8/19/12
August 19th, 2012 at 10:11 AM
Brilliant! Hannah. One of my favorites of yours.
August 19th, 2012 at 1:45 PM
Yes, Beautiful, Hannah… and it so reminds me of the movie I went to see yesterday: “The Odd Life of Timothy Green”; I think both you and your children will like this movie!
!
August 19th, 2012 at 10:48 PM
Beautiful, Hannah!
Marie Elena
August 20th, 2012 at 12:41 AM
well-penned Hannah … a lovely poem, truly
August 20th, 2012 at 7:03 PM
This is beautiful, Hannah!
August 22nd, 2012 at 8:17 PM
A huge hug of gratitude extended to each of you and a blushing apology for my lack of presence here. Life keeps doing that “busy,” thing but I think I’m on the other side of the bell curve now!
Thank you and smiles to all of you!
August 22nd, 2012 at 8:52 PM
Here’s to the other side!
!
meg
August 26th, 2012 at 4:44 PM
Thank You for sharing – you say so much in what you write.
August 19th, 2012 at 9:49 AM
PROPPED UP
I met her shortly after I got married.
She knows all my secrets,
and still loves me.
She was there when I was pregnant,
and all my single friends fell away.
She understood my loneliness.
She threw a baby shower for my second child,
something I never had for my first,
and gave me such joy.
My children cherish her,
my husband likes her,
I can’t be happy without her.
She has been my analyst,
my companion, my sounding board,
my entertainment, and my friend.
Together we have solved the world’s problems,
and our own.
She gives me hope.
Our lives have all been richer
because she is with us.
I hope she always will be.
August 19th, 2012 at 10:13 AM
Nicely done. I hope you let her read it.
August 19th, 2012 at 11:05 AM
August 19th, 2012 at 1:42 PM
Ohh… a True Friend (very rare)! Loved: “… She knows all my secrets, and still loves me…”
August 19th, 2012 at 10:50 PM
What a special relationship. We could all use one like that, Linda. Well written, as always.
Marie Elena
August 20th, 2012 at 12:41 AM
Sounds like one in a million, a treasure indeed – nice write Linda
August 20th, 2012 at 10:29 PM
Beautiful
August 21st, 2012 at 4:42 PM
What a wonderful friendship.
August 26th, 2012 at 4:48 PM
We all have many friends – but, friendship you describe, and dearly know and love is a pearl without compare. How blessed you both are.
August 19th, 2012 at 10:07 AM
Jack Smith
You were an old man—
in our eyes
(in your thirties).
Skinny—
you said if you turned sideways
and stuck your tongue out,
we’d think you were a zipper.
You said funny things
like calling cars you didn’t know
the make of “vehickies.”
You weren’t healthy
and had to take one step at a time.
The doctors said you wouldn’t last very long.
You said you had too much to do for the Lord.
Last I knew, you were still going strong
in your seventies.
You started a Bible study for teens.
You gave us our first Bibles
and we read them into the night,
laughing when the pigs fell in the water.
One evening you asked my best friend and I
if we knew Jesus as our Savior.
We said no.
“Do you want to?” you asked.
We said yes.
Thank you.
August 19th, 2012 at 1:40 PM
Lovely…
August 19th, 2012 at 10:54 PM
Connie, I’m thankful for Jack as well.
Marie Elena
August 20th, 2012 at 12:42 AM
So simply yet eloquently stated Connie – I really love this.
August 22nd, 2012 at 12:04 AM
Beautiful. I love how you painted his picture.
August 23rd, 2012 at 2:34 PM
How wonderful that this friend made sure so many knew the Greatest Friend!
August 26th, 2012 at 4:51 PM
How special a friend and man to share and nuture the greatest of gifts.
August 19th, 2012 at 1:39 PM
Ahh… Wonderful!
August 20th, 2012 at 8:33 AM
Thank you Henrietta and Marie.:)
August 20th, 2012 at 12:21 PM
Uh- oh, Walt disappeared!
August 20th, 2012 at 2:25 PM
No, just moved it up to the prompt explanation – the only way I could have added the photo. Walt
August 20th, 2012 at 7:13 PM
Aww…
August 19th, 2012 at 3:00 PM
TRUE FRIEND
She is
Like so many whom I love
Across the ocean now
Yet I hold her close
A treasure of a soul-mate
That was found
In distant lands
Where I survived a shipwreck
And was a wreck myself
A Robinson
She wasn’t Friday to me
Just a friend
Or maybe both of us
Some days were Fridays
And other – Robinsons to one another
We taught each other lessons
And we learned
And grew a bond
That’s getting only stronger
While we’re separated
By such trifles
As time, and space, and borders
She is always
Right here
With me
August 19th, 2012 at 6:20 PM
Oh, I know Exactly what you mean: “…separated by such trifles As…space, and borders……is always Right here With me”. This world that we live in is so very mysterious!!
August 20th, 2012 at 9:38 AM
Thank you, Hen, it really is!
August 19th, 2012 at 10:57 PM
Yes … “such trifles as time, and space, and borders” speaks to me as well. Love it.
Marie Elena
August 20th, 2012 at 9:07 AM
Thank you, Marie Elena!
August 20th, 2012 at 12:46 AM
So beautifully put Alexandra (I hope I have that right?) – these are the dearest friends sometimes … the ones so far away but held so close…at least that’s been my experience also
August 20th, 2012 at 2:56 AM
“… the ones so far away but held so close…” yes… if you can’t reach out and Touch that person, the distance is much too far…
August 20th, 2012 at 9:12 AM
Thank you, Sharon!
I usually go by Sasha. It’s a Russian nickname for Alexandra.
Yes, you got it right! It’s just that it’s a bit long and kind of “heavy for everyday use”
August 21st, 2012 at 4:45 PM
Love how you weaved references to Friday and Robinson C.
August 22nd, 2012 at 10:39 AM
August 22nd, 2012 at 12:09 AM
Isn’t interesting how friendships can stay strong, and grow, when we are oceans apart? I have a very close friend who is French, living in France. I’m a California girl. We’re like sisters.
August 22nd, 2012 at 10:41 AM
This friend I’m talking about is in Prague, Czech Republic, where I used to live for quite a while. I’m a “Maryland girl” now
August 26th, 2012 at 4:54 PM
No amounts of miles can break the bond of friendship.
August 19th, 2012 at 4:01 PM
A rough draft… trying to get things ready for school.
**
Playing Outside
We wore a path from house to house
riding bikes, roller-skating
playing dress-up, pantomime;
living, loving outside freedom
we shared together, unaware
of struggles caged within.
We started kindergarten
at different schools;
you public, me private.
Nothing changed
until I moved.
August 19th, 2012 at 6:23 PM
… life…
August 19th, 2012 at 10:58 PM
Your opening line says it all, Laurie. Love it. But did you end up totally losing touch when you moved?
Just curious.
Marie Elena
August 20th, 2012 at 8:47 AM
Unfortunately, yes. I was only nine. We were moving back to TX from New Orleans. I often wonder about her.
August 19th, 2012 at 11:52 PM
Oooh, I like this . . .
August 20th, 2012 at 12:47 AM
yes Laurie – broad strokes painting real life for sure …
August 22nd, 2012 at 12:11 AM
When you are a kid, moving changes everything. I love this – especially the first and last line.
August 22nd, 2012 at 9:00 AM
It really does. Thanks.
August 26th, 2012 at 4:56 PM
As long as she is alive in your memory, she is alive in your thoughts and a part of you.
August 19th, 2012 at 4:27 PM
Blessed
It says Postcard and is decorated
with sketches of flowers. On it you
had written a rarely received
note of encouragement.
My only memento of your life
sits on my desk and tells of
your appreciation of my
coming to church on the bus.
You told me my children
spoke with courtesy and
kindness to each other—
a conversation which blessed you.
You blessed me by just being you.
Faithfulness was your routine as you
also took the bus to church, loved
your husband and raised your children.
At your funeral the pastor
praised you as one who always
welcomed new people in spite
of the pain from your cancer.
Your husband and children
called you blessed as do
many who have known you.
Enjoy the presence of your Savior.
August 19th, 2012 at 5:55 PM
Sheryl, what a lovely tribute to one who sounds like a dear soul. We all hope to be remembered so kindly and so beautifully.
August 19th, 2012 at 6:25 PM
I couldn’t agree more… I especially loved: “…You blessed me by just being you.”
August 19th, 2012 at 10:59 PM
Add my agreement with LInda’s sentiment as well.
Marie Elena
August 20th, 2012 at 12:48 AM
Add me to the others – have nothing more original to say but I do like what you’ve written about this wonderful soul …
August 20th, 2012 at 7:05 PM
Very touching.
August 21st, 2012 at 4:47 PM
“Just being you” is love wrapped in friendship.
August 22nd, 2012 at 12:13 AM
True acts of kindness and welcome make a huge impression. She sounds like a wonderfully warm person.
August 26th, 2012 at 5:02 PM
How little we know at the time what the effect of one person will have on others. She was being who-she-was and share that with others. What a treasure to have both you and your children experience a part of her life and caring.
August 19th, 2012 at 6:26 PM
True Friends Forever
Neither one of us remembers when
And how we met. The story goes that
We were four years old when one of
your brothers took you across the street
And introduced us. Neither of us was allowed
To cross the street alone. Our memories begin
On each side of the curb where we stood and
Hollered back and forth to each other..
Our children and then our grandchildren
Always wanted to know what life was like
In the “Old days” – both of us bristled
At that expression, but there were horses
Pulling wagons of ice and junk and every
Time a car approached all the boys ran
Outside to look at it and see what model
It was and the “winner” was whoever
Saw the most models because cars were rare
During the depression and then the war which
Came to us second hand, we heard it on the radio
And wrote to relatives who were in the service
And prayed for everyone “Over there”
We played in the high school band. You starred
In the drama club. I wrote poetry and how you
Cheered when a poem of mine was published in
“Seventeen” magazine. Your mother had taken
a job in Higbee’s department store so you
Could attend an all girls college in New England
I also went out-of-town, to a school in the South.
Which was co-ed. We almost lost touch.
Just a few letters now and then until you
Met the love of your life who was the wrong
Religion and oh, the tears, the threats, the drama!
That summer we dropped out of college and
Became friends again “Goodnight Irene”
Was on every juke box and radio station , and
We were singing it when I drove you and John to
Catch the bus to Indiana where you could get
Married in a couple hours and at the station,
I danced with a man with one leg and his friend
Was so impressed that eventually we were married
Which is another story altogether and you and I each
had six children . You kept on living in Cleveland.
Hubby and I built a house near his family. It was
In the country along the lake shore. We got together every
summer at least – our husbands were WW2 vets
and became friends. You and your friends would
pitch tents in our yard, the kids ran wild and when
we all got together, oh, the parties we had!
It was you who left this earth first, and there isn’t
A day goes by I don’t remember something about
Us, usually with laughter.. Of the gang that we hung
Around with, I am the last one left here, and not
Able to travel to Cleveland.
So it goes, time, the one absolute that takes and
Gives and takes away and may we all meet again
Somewhere, all of us, parents, children, friends
In His time, in His place.
August 19th, 2012 at 7:23 PM
Marian, this is so beautiful, thank you.
August 19th, 2012 at 8:22 PM
Yes… thank you!
August 19th, 2012 at 11:04 PM
Marian, what a cache of memory and emotion. Absolutely beautifully done.
Marie Elena
August 20th, 2012 at 12:51 AM
Oh Marian – thank you for sharing this large lovely slice of your life … so beautifully told …
August 20th, 2012 at 10:18 AM
This poem is beautiful and captures the story of your friendship so well!
August 22nd, 2012 at 12:16 AM
What wonderful memories you’ve captured here. And such an enduring friendship!
August 26th, 2012 at 5:07 PM
OH, but the “Old Days” were such GOOD days. How wonderful to have someone, through the years, to be able to share the memories of those day together. … someone to still hold close…
August 19th, 2012 at 10:40 PM
Here’s another:
My Friend Nicole
We were nonsmokers
yet we used to sit
on the back porch and
smoke while imbibing
wine, passing time with
our whine about men,
commiserate our lowly
plights under patio
lights swarming with
moths and mosquitoes;
orange Citronella candles
spewing fumes in the air,
but damn if we’d stink
up the house,
plan futures we deserved-
not with those rude jerks
or assholes (can you
believe what they did?)
but with pipe dream
illusions blown away
on a puff and a whiff
of smoky experience.
August 19th, 2012 at 11:05 PM
“pipe dream
illusions blown away
on a puff and a whiff
of smoky experience”
Love that!
Marie Elena
August 20th, 2012 at 8:48 AM
Thank you!
August 20th, 2012 at 12:53 AM
more, more! I’m loving these glimpses of the people who made up your life Laurie …
August 20th, 2012 at 8:49 AM
… that’s what I love about this project, too… thanks, Sharon
August 22nd, 2012 at 12:18 AM
I can see the two of you sitting, smoking, talking and “whining” about men. Loved this.
August 22nd, 2012 at 8:59 AM
Thanks, Annette… being the “nonsmokers” we were, huh?
August 26th, 2012 at 5:10 PM
What a fun picture I conjure up of the two of you sitting there together.
August 19th, 2012 at 10:55 PM
You need to post the photo, Walt. Everyone would get a huge kick out of it.
Marie Elena
August 19th, 2012 at 11:51 PM
I just couldn’t get serious with this prompt today . . . maybe I’ll try again later in the week.
Hair Today
Looking in the mirror
Has always been
A hair-raising experience.
Most mornings,
The battle between
Fingers and filaments
Ended in an angry ponytail -
The very definition
Of uneasy stalemate.
Then one day
A roommate
With magic fingers
And wise words
Taught me to embrace
My wild mane.
My hair and I
Have begun
To understand one another,
And my locks
Will never be the same
(Thank goodness).
August 20th, 2012 at 12:54 AM
Never under-estimate the value of a friend who’s good with hair … seriously, they can change your life … in my view … cool poem
August 20th, 2012 at 11:14 PM
Oh yes, she’s absolutely invaluable! I’m glad you enjoyed the poem.
August 20th, 2012 at 3:04 AM
Hee, hee… I haven’t had the great fortune of having mine in a “tangled wreck” for quite a while now…
August 20th, 2012 at 11:16 PM
“Tangled wreck” . . . yes, that definitely describes my hair some days (when there’s no one talented around to do it for me)
August 21st, 2012 at 6:45 AM
LOL!
!!
August 20th, 2012 at 7:59 AM
SO CUTE! And love this: “an angry ponytail -The very definition of uneasy stalemate.”
Marie Elena
August 20th, 2012 at 11:16 PM
Thanks, Marie!
August 20th, 2012 at 7:07 PM
So sweet.
August 20th, 2012 at 11:16 PM
Aww, thanks.
August 22nd, 2012 at 12:19 AM
This made me smile. It gives a whole new dimension to a bad hair day.
August 26th, 2012 at 5:14 PM
For sure – great to have a friend to lead you to better days.
August 20th, 2012 at 12:01 AM
[...] the fourth part of the memoir project at Poetic Bloomings, we were to write a poem about a friend (basically anyone [...]
August 20th, 2012 at 12:25 AM
Thanks be to the Faithful
Every time I return from yet
another sojourn
to the great beyond,
An increasingly unknowable place
That grows ever more difficult to describe
And even more challenging to articulate
Without exception, without fail
I am always warmly welcomed back
Embraced by a group of friends,
the nucleus of which
is such that I know not how to classify,
categorize, or in any way explain
Such exceptional people,
I am certain,
are as rare as true love
And just as precious
if not even more so
People – friends, of whom
I know I am unworthy
Yet feel incredibly blessed
to have in my life.
When I finally soar back into their lives,
as if on the wings of some recalcitrant
—or at least at last, forgiving angel—
There are never any recriminations,
nor the slightest whiff of disapproval
and not a hint of disappointment.
If any of these, feel any of that
they are incredibly careful
to keep such feelings
expressly well-hidden, from me.
Their love and acceptance seems,
and after years of experience, I believe is,
truly unconditional.
So – no matter how long my
fickle health has me
go to ground
Or, contrarily provokes
months of behavior so bizarre
My family must crave disowning me
This company, never intrusively,
always reassuringly, but really – just there
Lets me know throughout all the
shades and vagaries that
make up my shredded life:
I am loved, I am treasured,
I am valued beyond all measure and—
When I am so inclined
or my demons at last
let loose their surly bonds
No matter should it take
a million untold days
My band of allies
will still be there for me
Eager, nay, impatient
to help pick up the ruined threads
That link the fragile web of my existence
to the weft and weave of theirs
and to carry on as if uninterrupted…
We continue
Their strength becomes
My strength, at least
For a time
and I know,
I do, I am so very blessed.
S.E.Ingraham©
August 20th, 2012 at 3:14 AM
Oh, so Beautiful… especially loved: “…Such exceptional people, I am certain, are as rare as true love And just as precious if not even more so…”
August 20th, 2012 at 7:57 AM
This warms my heart, Sharon. Deeply.
Marie Elena
August 20th, 2012 at 7:08 PM
Sharon, I just love this.
August 20th, 2012 at 10:23 PM
Beautiful, Sharon! I especially like:
“…to help pick up the ruined threads
That link the fragile web of my existence
to the weft and weave of theirs
and to carry on as if uninterrupted… ”
True friends, indeed!
August 26th, 2012 at 5:18 PM
When caught in a whirl-wind…. note the many specks that fly in the wind with you. As you look close you will see that each speck is a friend, a prayer, a wish, or a thoughts whirling with you, holding you in love.
August 20th, 2012 at 12:43 AM
I agree with Megs, Walt – this so sounds like your gig … way to go and great poem …
August 20th, 2012 at 1:24 AM
Here’s my attempt:
Brother
The best older brother,
A girl ever had;
The best of examples,
A brave young man;
You were all that and more,
A really good friend.
In loving memory of my older brother, Cameron, who died in 2008 after living with lung cancer for 2 years. He was only 12.
August 20th, 2012 at 3:16 AM
Ohh, so young… I am glad that you had him, even if for a Moment in time… Lovely.
August 20th, 2012 at 7:55 AM
Welcome to Poetic Bloomings, Erin! Everyone, I believe this is only the second poem Erin ever wrote.
Only 12 years old, and 16% of those dealing with cancer … so sad …
Marie Elena
August 20th, 2012 at 9:27 AM
Erin, I’m so sorry for your loss. Thank you for your poem.
August 20th, 2012 at 11:40 AM
Thanks to all three of you.
August 20th, 2012 at 7:10 PM
This is beautiful, Erin… Memories cherished through poems.
August 20th, 2012 at 9:16 PM
what a lovely courageous tribute Erin – I’m sure you must miss him very much; I think he was lucky to have had such a loving sister – thanks for sharing this with us
August 21st, 2012 at 12:43 AM
Thank you both very much. I do miss him, more than I can say with words. He was, as I said, the best older brother a girl ever had. But I’m comforted in the knowledge that where he is mow, he’s free from the awful pain, the sorrow and weariness which were brought on by the cancer. Even if I forget that fact sometimes, still it’s comforting.
August 22nd, 2012 at 12:22 AM
What a difficult poem to read. I stumbled across those final words… 12, two years with cancer. …wow… oh, wow. I can’t even imagine. How hard that must have been for you and your family.
August 26th, 2012 at 5:22 PM
Beautiful tribute – as long as you hold him close in your heart, mind and memory, he will be with you.
August 20th, 2012 at 9:26 AM
Walt and Meg: both your Sunday am poems just beautiful, one of you looking West; the other East…
August 20th, 2012 at 10:39 AM
Best man
He was like me, tall
and musical, and clever.
He was the one man
I ever fell in love with
and he was gentle with me.
He is married now,
balding and slightly unkempt
as he chases the
kids while his partner looks on.
We reminisce about life
and parents dying
and the slow discovery
of truth long buried.
We talk in straight lines, of hell,
and words that fall like soft rain
and I realize
I love him as much today
as I did back then
when I melted before him
and he was gentle with me.
August 20th, 2012 at 12:13 PM
Lovely, Andrew… how fortunate you are to have such a special friend!
August 20th, 2012 at 3:04 PM
What tenderness expressed in a poem Andrew … this is so poignant, so “from the heart” – very nice.
August 20th, 2012 at 10:20 PM
Oh yes! A lovely relationship — perfectly captured, Andrew! How lucky you are to recognize it, and share it still.
August 21st, 2012 at 10:53 PM
Such a tender, loving, lovely tribute. Men don’t have close friends such as this nearly often enough. Beautiful, Andres.
Marie Elena
August 22nd, 2012 at 12:25 AM
The repeated refrain of him being gentle with you is very powerful.
August 26th, 2012 at 5:24 PM
Good man to know.
August 20th, 2012 at 10:39 AM
More Than Teammates
(dedicated to the fencing team)
They stood clustered together
Knowing each other.
That soon changed.
I wanted this first for the sport
Of hitting people with swords
Not expecting to a find a family.
Teammates who became like
Brothers and sisters while we pushed ourselves,
And each other, everyday to get better,
Perfecting our skill.
This group of people
Accepted me, craziness and all,
As the person I was
And made me believe
I could be the person I wanted to be.
They were my personal cheering section
On and off the strip.
Some held secrets, some made me laugh,
Others helped me get up when I was down.
To think I almost missed out.
My coach
Pushed us
Made us work for what we wanted
But always had a kind word
And advice on every aspect of life.
These people became my solace.
Seeing their faces (half of them at least) in school
Gave me hope that I wasn’t alone,
That there was a stress free place
I could go, which was where they were.
August 20th, 2012 at 10:41 AM
Wonderful! So great to be part of a team – on and off the strip.
August 20th, 2012 at 12:16 PM
And… how Wonderful that they: “…Accepted me, craziness and all, As the person I was And made me believe i could be the person I wanted to be…”
!
August 20th, 2012 at 9:17 PM
Nicely penned Lauren – a testament to you and your team – lovely
August 21st, 2012 at 10:59 PM
So nice! Everything a team SHOULD be. Thanks for this, Lauren.
Marie Elena
August 26th, 2012 at 5:27 PM
How special is a team that becomes friends, support and family.
Well presented.
August 20th, 2012 at 10:41 AM
My Second Mom
Tall,
gangly,
red-hair &
freckles,
loud, laughing,
big-boned,
athletic –
one glance
could confirm
no common blood
between us
(If she had a totem, it was
a giraffe — while mine
might be a field mouse)
Often embarrassed, but
rarely outdone (she could sing,
belch & blush with the best of them)
Beating the neighborhood boys
at football in the street (for none
could fathom how to block a lady)
Life wasn’t always kind,
but she was
(without exception)
_ _ _ _ _
ps: You can see her picture — if you bop over to my blog.
August 20th, 2012 at 10:43 AM
Love it – the giraffe totem is a gem. And the ending is a wonderfully concise tribute – life wasn’t always kind, but she was. YES.
August 20th, 2012 at 12:18 PM
!
! I will take Kindness over all else, always!!!
August 20th, 2012 at 10:10 PM
Thanks, Hen! I’m with you on that one. Trying to be more like her. :-]
August 21st, 2012 at 6:40 AM
!!
!!
August 20th, 2012 at 10:09 PM
Thanks, Andrew! She was amazing — and is missed. :-]
August 20th, 2012 at 10:12 PM
Ooops! Posted my thanks in the wrong place :-/ Thank you again — in the right place — Andrew!
)
August 20th, 2012 at 10:17 PM
… or not. LOL (I tried, anyway — really!) :-]
August 20th, 2012 at 4:55 PM
Pam, you have such a gift for singing songs of the heart. This is lovely.
August 20th, 2012 at 10:14 PM
Awww… thanks, Sara! But the songs were all hers, really!
August 21st, 2012 at 11:00 PM
Lovely indeed, as is Sara’s comment.
I love this place.
Marie Elena
August 20th, 2012 at 9:19 PM
Sounds like a keeper alright and one you’re lucky to have … good poem Pam and as others have said, it sings!
August 20th, 2012 at 10:16 PM
Oh, Sharon — she really was a gift! She’s been gone a couple years now, but is still sorely missed. :-] Thank you!
August 21st, 2012 at 2:50 PM
sorry – I missed the use of the past tense – I’m glad you had her in your life but sorry you don’t have her still …
August 20th, 2012 at 11:18 PM
A wonderful poem, as the others have said. Well done!
August 21st, 2012 at 9:31 PM
Thank you missr!
August 22nd, 2012 at 12:27 AM
She sounds wonderful and how lucky you were to have a second mom that was kind and fun (and could keep up with the boys).
August 26th, 2012 at 5:30 PM
Love bond can be som much strong that that of blood.
August 20th, 2012 at 10:59 AM
Prompt For Poetic Bloomings (write of an outside influence; friend or teacher, etc)
“I was a weedy garden, overgrown”
There comes a time in any garden’s scope
when magic will appear; so unexplained
and such a cultivator for my slope;
I called him “Mr. Snow”, tho not his name.
Reminded me of tune from Carousel.
I kept my notebook with his accolades;
when humming it, his meter taught me well
and so my garden grew though in the shade.
I kept this teacher’s approbation near;
his love for my fine Haiku tucked away
into a secret garden where no fear
could ever enter or find disarray.
Sometimes the weeds come faster than the bloom
But with his cultivation I have tune.
August 20th, 2012 at 12:23 PM
I have changed that last line to:
“But with his cultivation, metered tune. “
August 20th, 2012 at 12:24 PM
Wonderful!
I have a Secret Garden too…
August 20th, 2012 at 9:21 PM
so lovely, and I agree, the revision makes it perfect …
August 21st, 2012 at 11:03 PM
Absolutely. Beautifully penned, with perfect revision.
Marie Elena
August 23rd, 2012 at 2:29 PM
Thanks, everyone. And that should obviously be “bus” and not “bust.”
August 26th, 2012 at 5:34 PM
Beautiful to have someone care enough to help us grow.
August 20th, 2012 at 11:14 PM
Those Winters From Over Here.
It was winter at the bust stop,
the telephone poll already covered in frozen spit
when things first started to shift,
the gentle hum that comes either right before or right after,
the choices not made piling up on the curb
before we realized some have expiration dates.
There were more of us then,
even some we hadn’t met yet,
others already gone.
I slept more.
Stop being so damned depressing, says the streetlight.
What would you know about emptiness? says the batter’s box.
How much of then remains,
which clinks in our operandi left over,
which parts frozen to us
during those New Jersey winters waiting for the bus?
It was always my job to return the loose pitt bull
since he bit everyone else
and most of that not-being-bit by dogs is still here,
but maybe all I am doing is avoiding
identifying anyone despite the prompt’s orders.
But with all the you zigging and me zagging
and nagging injuries along the way,
it isn’t always as clear as it should be
at least if you ask me.
Who could pick just one when so much has been changed,
the number of winters adding up,
the bus just now pulling up to the stop
or so it sometimes seems.
August 21st, 2012 at 6:39 AM
Wow… the world you show us…
August 21st, 2012 at 2:55 PM
I can relate to this too well mike and actually did cop out a bit and used an older poem that still resonates and is true, but kept me from having to name any one person … your last line really hit home for me … good one.
August 21st, 2012 at 11:06 PM
Intriguing, mike. And yes, much is to be said about bus stop relationships. Excellent!
Marie Elena
August 20th, 2012 at 11:54 PM
Under a Sheltering Wing
She had a gift for inspiring fear,
shame too, although she was thin,
a stooped figure like a crane in a cardigan,
each morning entering the classroom
with her bottomless coffee cup,
her glasses riding her nose like a jockey.
Pity the wretch that did not end his conversation
once she took her place and peered at each
of us in turn, then said good morning
and started class. She was a rare species
in my life: a teacher who meant it, who knew
what she was doing and intended to do it well.
All the heretofore gifted young scholars
buoyed by reputation and minimal effort
had to rethink sentence structure and phrasing,
finally learning that punctuation
was not purely decorative, that words mean
and therefore deserve a little respect.
Naturally, she frightened me.
disappointing someone you admire is a fear’s fodder.
with my mother and Mrs. Hood molding me,
I could envision my life among words,
even teaching with her for several years,
creating yearbooks, seeing her with new eyes.
She said, “Let me be your mama at school;
if you have problems, I can help you.” She did.
She and my mama were kindred spirits,
two halves of a literary whole,
both smitten with unscribbled paper,
in love with story and poetry, with possibility,
and I had the good fortune to have been sheltered
beneath their sheltering wings and taught to fly,
but that’s a poem for another time.
August 21st, 2012 at 6:33 AM
She so reminds me of a Jr. High English teacher… I do not like to disappoint people, so I LEARNED in her class!
August 21st, 2012 at 2:57 PM
Wow – I’m so envious … great write Jane!
August 21st, 2012 at 11:11 PM
I’m always envious of Jane’s ability and presentation.
“A teacher who meant it” says a great deal, in a slightly unusual way.
And this? This is simply beautiful:
“She and my mama were kindred spirits,
two halves of a literary whole,
both smitten with unscribbled paper,
in love with story and poetry, with possibility”
Marie Elena
August 21st, 2012 at 11:25 PM
Thanks, friends.
August 22nd, 2012 at 12:31 AM
I, too, had a teacher who made a huge difference in my understanding of words. I wrote about her (further down in the comments)
August 26th, 2012 at 5:41 PM
I am still trying to learn of the words I did not learn way back then. In school the teachers I remember taught numbers, science, art and drafting.
August 21st, 2012 at 3:10 AM
I had a busy weekend, so I’d simply copy/pasted the prompt into a word document until I had time to write. This morning I wrote my response. But now, having read Marie’s, Walt’s and everybody else’s contributions, I am ashamed to post my paltry poem! The thanks, though, are sincere.
EMINENCE GRISE
The archetypical headmaster -
Doctor Walters of billowing gown,
stern and unbending, majestic and tall,
to be sent to him for misdemeanour
was punishment by fear and trembling.
For the boys it was fear of the cane
but for us girls it was words.
He had such a way with them
he could shrink our egos to zero.
But his lessons were another matter.
He taught us English in a way
that led us to places beyond imagining,
stimulated the love of reading,
gave us the tools that we’d need for writing.
It took me a while to realise
what I should be doing
with my life, but now that I am,
thank you Doc.
August 21st, 2012 at 6:29 AM
“…in a way that led us to places beyond imagining, stimulated the love of reading, gave us the tools that we’d need for writing…” Fantastic!
August 21st, 2012 at 2:58 PM
Another teacher doing the job wonderfully … great poem Viv …
August 21st, 2012 at 10:06 PM
Viv, this is anything but “paltry.” He obviously had a strong influence on you, and you present it beautifully.
Marie Elena
August 22nd, 2012 at 12:32 AM
He sounds like quite the character!
August 26th, 2012 at 5:44 PM
What a great man to have shared such beauty with you.
August 21st, 2012 at 6:25 AM
The Comments seem to be skipping around the page, I think.
August 21st, 2012 at 4:14 PM
“Hands that bless”
One
thousand and
one transparent hands
extended through time to bless
and raise my head even when I
was suspended in time, even
when I was too blind
to see or feel—
even the times
I declared with ornery breath
that I never wanted a bloody hand
in the first place.
August 21st, 2012 at 7:05 PM
Beautiful, jlynn!
August 21st, 2012 at 10:02 PM
A very intense and fascinating piece, jlynn. I’m not sure I completely “get it,” but it begs me to read and re-read.
Marie Elena
August 26th, 2012 at 5:47 PM
We are never alone – there are always those who go before us to lead the way.
August 26th, 2012 at 7:06 PM
Exactly!
August 21st, 2012 at 9:58 PM
Unintended Influences
Those bullying girls skilled
In the art of middle school torture,
The dishonest men who received affection
But only returned derision and betrayal,
The non-believers seeking to inject
Their doubts into my resolve…
They’ve taken their shots,
Scarring my ego,
Almost destroyed me,
But they fueled my defiance,
Made me push me past my limitations,
And they continue to drive me
To build a legacy worth leaving behind.
August 21st, 2012 at 10:03 PM
Wow. What a creative twist on the prompt, and inspirational way of thinking, Mary!
Marie Elena
August 21st, 2012 at 10:09 PM
Thanks so much, Marie!
August 22nd, 2012 at 6:44 AM
Yes!
August 26th, 2012 at 5:51 PM
Strength comes from unexpected places – but those places give us the understanding and insight to be able to reach out a hand to help others along the way.
August 22nd, 2012 at 12:06 AM
Mrs. Zastrow
She stood in front of the class,
(Honors English, senior year),
Shoulder length hair
black and shining
like raven wings.
I received back my essay,
staring in silent disbelief
at her red ink covering my blue.
I gathered my books,
blinking back tears of rage;
hating her youth
her poise
her raven black hair.
I went to her classroom;
the harmonious years of easy As
replaced with the discord of a D.
I coughed and sputtered.
We sat.
She wrote.
I finished the year in triumph.
I practiced the power of The Preludes;
The picture painting power of words.
I did not fail,
I earned my proudest A.
At 49, she was gone,
leaving her sparkle,
her raven feathered life,
behind.
August 22nd, 2012 at 6:43 AM
Great teacher!
August 22nd, 2012 at 6:55 AM
A true educator and caring soul. Sad that she was gone so soon, and hoping she knows what influence she had in your life. Great write, Annette.
Marie Elena
August 26th, 2012 at 6:00 PM
I am sure that she saw more skill in you than what you were aware and understood that you could do so much more if you stopped floating and began to try. What a precious gift she helped you find.
I had an art teach who made us “Start all over” on an assignment. I was devistated – but to this day, the resulting methods I leaned on the re-done project I still use in my illustrating work today.
August 26th, 2012 at 6:05 PM
Yes, I had been floating and I was bored. She made me work and I reveled in finding that I was capable of more.
August 27th, 2012 at 1:09 AM
August 22nd, 2012 at 6:34 PM
Sorry I’m late. Not sorry I was away at the beach.
Headstrong and Headless
Then there was that time
I packed my belongings
on impulse
yet again,
and headed upstate
New York with a dark
blonde, curly-headed
lunatic,who sang songs,
a cappella, when he was
not drunk. After a punishing
three month stint
with the green-eyed,
erratic inventor
of my discretions, I called Kathy,
begging her,
please pick me up.
Get me out of here.
In a red Chevy Blazer,
she dragged her daughter
of six, drove through
the endless Pennsylvania
Turnpike and rescued me.
We packed everything
we could cram into that Blazer,
got lost three times on the way
home, leaving a trail of fools
and foolishness behind.
August 24th, 2012 at 8:24 AM
Oh, Sara…. what a true friend… I am so relieved that she was there for you!
August 24th, 2012 at 1:33 PM
Still is!
August 25th, 2012 at 7:17 AM
Wonderful!!!
August 24th, 2012 at 9:49 PM
Great write, Sara!
Marie Elena
August 26th, 2012 at 8:22 PM
Thanks, Marie!
August 26th, 2012 at 6:06 PM
Such a great, true friend.
If you were beached on the Oregon coast – what a wonderful place to be.
I hope to be at Arch Cape in October. Sun or storm – I will take either. and love it.
August 26th, 2012 at 8:21 PM
It was like a dream!
August 27th, 2012 at 1:12 AM
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August 22nd, 2012 at 8:10 PM
[...] WITH A LITTLE HELP FROM MY FRIENDS – PROMPT # 69 [...]
August 23rd, 2012 at 2:14 PM
Let’s Hear it For the Girls
Strong-willed women,
often don’t get along.
Not true of this group.
Four females in radio,
you’d think egos might get in the way.
Not for the “four babes in the morning”
(our dream radio show)!
From families and foes to funerals and faith;
marriages, divorces, births and deaths.
Nothing if off limits with this crew.
Through thick and thin,
(mostly thicker bodies and thinning patience),
we support the great choices
and the bad decisions.
Our journeys are different, but our paths intersect.
And we’re still waiting for that BIG break
when we go syndicate and spill everything
over the airwaves….NOT!
© KED 2012
August 24th, 2012 at 8:25 AM
August 24th, 2012 at 9:50 PM
Hahaha! GREAT, Kelly! “Through thick and thin, (mostly thicker bodies and thinning patience)…” Love it!
Marie Elena
August 26th, 2012 at 6:09 PM
For sure…
August 26th, 2012 at 4:15 PM
Back at the computer and trying to ‘catch up’ – WONDERFUL responces to the prompt of what I have had a chance to read so far.
The prompt reminded me of this poem I recently wrote for a LucBat Challenge in Poetic Asides.
Written of a friend since high school, 5 weeks younger than me and the closest to a twin I’ve ever experiences. I am working on another new poem for the prompt….
TALL (LucBat)
I never seem too small
When with you, I feel tall and can
Mountains scale, oceans span,
Explore uncharted land, and brave
Fast rivers, a dark cave,
Gathering memories to save, then seek
To score new, deep music
Of love that I can keep within
A gold and satin bin,
Or dented rusty tin, and know
Wherever place I go,
Treasures held will bestow on me
Reminders that you’ll be
Always a part of me, my all.
August 26th, 2012 at 4:20 PM
Where did it go? What I just posted?
OK – it ‘landed’ just after Kelly’s post.
Wonder where this one will go!
August 28th, 2012 at 11:26 PM
There’s No Place Like Poem
Sixth grade
Got the tough teacher
Mrs. K
She looked a lot
Like the wicked witch of the West
Except dressed for success
Pressed blouse, fitted skirt,
Sensible heels and dark red lips
Terrified I sat straight,
Back pressed against polished wood
Waited for the worst
She was stern
She gave lots of homework
She yelled
And she noticed I wrote poetry
Half-way through cursive lessons
She called me to the back of class
Mortified, I walked through the desks
Sure a scolding was at hand
Instead she said
My handwriting was beautiful
Should be used to write stories and poems
Not rote exercises
Right before summer break
Mrs. K walked up to me at recess
With one of my poems in her hand
Said, “You are a great writer”
When I looked up at her
The afternoon sun haloed her hair
Gave her a glowing crown
Just like Glinda
Telling me all I had to do was tap my heels
And believe
August 29th, 2012 at 12:19 PM
Junior High Choir Director
There was a man –
What man?
The man (High School Choir Director) with the power –
What power?
The power to move me into high school choir –
I failed.
I was the only one to fail.
It was a crushing blow.
I wore shades in choir
to hide my tears.
But…
my Junior High Choir Director
formed an after school madrigal group –
and so throughout High School
we sang at Nursing Homes at the holidays
and went caroling door to door –
part of me always felt like a charity case
but the other part of me
was eternally grateful
to be given the chance
to do something I loved
with a great group of friends.
He tried to pick up the pieces
of my broken self-esteem,
and though my own self-doubt
left some chips and cracks,
he gave it back to me,
more than half full.
August 30th, 2012 at 7:28 AM
Wishes Do Come True
We’ve been friends for nearly
twenty year now
and even though we see
each other rarely, like
maybe once a year,
the time rolls back like blinds
and we are again one
mind, one humour, one
friendship that I treasure
beyond most others. She’s
the friend that I always
wished I had so there’s truth -
Wishes do come true.
September 1st, 2012 at 7:03 AM
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September 1st, 2012 at 2:58 PM
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April 12th, 2013 at 3:35 AM
About friends – better to have 100 real friends than 100 000$
May 22nd, 2013 at 12:11 AM
Jon
I don’t remember the first time we met
But we met, nevertheless
And became friends for life
Even though we’re far apart
I remember training him to become
A bartender at the NCO Club
Telling him the secret that
There are never more than two in line
The one in front of him and the one behind
I remember our many rounds of golf
Neither of us ever mastered the game
And neither of us actually cared
We were just out to have a little fun
I remember his distinctive and loud laugh
He would hyperventilate like a hyena
One night at Denny’s he got going so long
That the next table hollered, “Save the seals!”
Then there was the Halloween Party at the club
It was his night to call BINGO
What a surprise when he walked in the room
Wearing a diaper, a hat, and all painted in blue
He was the first human Smurf I’d ever seen
I remember being best man at his wedding
As he had been best man at mine
Just a couple of years before
And we’re both still married to the same girls
There are many happy memories of my friend Jon
Maybe one of these days we’ll get together again
Meanwhile, we stay in touch through Facebook
And, of course, with six matches of Words With Friends